As promised, today's the big reveal for Coetir: The People of the Wood!
If you've been paying attention to my posts (*wink*) you'll have already read the teaser info, and you'll know how I was inspired to write this work, so we're just going to jump right in.
I hope you enjoy this excerpt from one of my favorite works in progress...
Chapter I
I used to watch them every weekend.
Father would go out to work in the fields, and I was allowed to leave the
house. Ever since I was a child, I would go out and watch them. I would sit on
the very edge of the boundary line and peer through the trees, searching for
the people of the wood.
I knew better than to take even a
step beyond the boundary. Father had warned me of the dangers. The people of
the wood were not to be trifled with. If they ever came near me, I was to
leave. Mother didn’t even want me that close to them, but father overruled her.
There was no harm in watching, he’d said.
I know why father wanted me there.
He wanted me to see their rituals, hoping that I would learn to fear them. He
started letting me go to watch them whenever I’d finished my chores, and so I
would go almost every day. When the leaders of the colony saw how much I was
fascinated with them, they even granted me a place at the perimeter—much to
mother and father’s chagrin.
But the druids were the most
beautiful beings I’d ever seen. In some ways, they looked like us, like humans,
but in others they were almost too different to describe. Their bodies were
humanoid, two legs, two arms, one head between two shoulders, and they wore
pearlescent white clothes that turned brown near their bare feet and hands.
They moved almost silently through the wood—I had never even heard their feet
crunching on autumn leaves. In some ways, they were like the wood themselves.
The hair that sprouted from their heads was like vines and brambles, and the
females even had flowers growing within the strands. Their skin was light
violet, but in the light of the setting sun it turned almost green, allowing
them to vanish into the night.
It was all that I could see from
the boundary line, but I knew that their eyes and faces were different, too.
Though I couldn’t tell what it was, I knew they were not like the human faces I
saw at home in the village.
But one day
while I was watching them, a male who looked no older than me was led close to
the boundary between the trees and the fields. I hid in a blind I’d made so I
could more easily watch them, and I held my breath as he was forced by the five
older males to kneel.
This was
the first time that I was allowed to see any of them so closely, and I studied
them as well as I could. I had watched them performing rituals before, but
they’d never been so close to the boundary—and there was always a female
present. There was one in particular, one who looked more important than all
the others, who led the majority of the chanting rituals. Though I didn’t know
what they were doing, I always wished that I could understand them.
When they
began to speak to each other, it was like nothing I had ever heard before. I
had never been close enough to them to hear their voices.
“Ydych
chi'n siŵr?” one of the older males—the eldest of the group, I guessed—said. He
took hold of one of the other male’s arms, and it was then that I noticed the
blade in his hand.
“Wrth
gwrs,” the man with the knife replied. “Ef yw'r lladdwr y wrach.”
“Ni all fod
unrhyw ffordd arall,” one of the others added, taking the knife away from the
one and placing it at the kneeling male’s throat.
The
kneeling man tilted his head back, and as far as I could tell, he was stoic
about their apparent desire to kill him. I took the opportunity to take in his
appearance. After all, what were the chances that I would ever see them so
closely again?
The bridge of his nose had small
slats in the sides, and it barely protruded off his face. His beady black
eyes—no iris, no pupil, just small black eyes—stared straight toward my blind,
and if I didn’t know any better I would’ve thought that he was looking at me.
His pale violet lips were pursed, his hands and arms were relaxed at his
sides—he seemed resigned to the fact that they would kill him. His skin was the
most interesting thing of all. It was almost like tiny scales, as if he was
part reptilian like my brother’s pet lizard, and it was changing shades, ever
so slightly, from deeper to lighter violet.
“Ei wneud ar.” I wasn’t sure who
said it. Once the words were spoken, the knife was pressed into the flesh of
the kneeling male’s throat. I watched in horror as pale white blood began to
trickle from his flesh, and I had to clamp my hand over my mouth to keep myself
from shouting when the body simply vanished.
The five made their way back into
the wood.
I stayed where I was.
There was a rule, in our people,
that we could not enter the woods. For safety’s sake, most of us didn’t even
approach the boundary. Generally, it was only the younger ones who dared to
come close to the edge—aside from those who guarded it, of course. The treaty
with the druids said that we would not enter their territory, their sacred
grounds, and that they would not enter our villages. In return for this, they
would not cast their spells on our lands.
My father had told me stories of a
time before the treaty, when our people used to hunt in the woods. The druids
had poisoned their water and caused locusts to destroy their fields. Most of us
were still superstitious enough to believe that it could happen again—and most
of us, as children, had watched the druids performing their rituals and learned
that it was safer to leave them alone.
I was not one of those. I had been
watching the people of the wood for almost two decades, and I never wanted to
stop. I’d even been granted a position on the perimeter, because I was so
fascinated with them. Of course, I had to prove myself even more than most of
the others, for simple fact of being a woman. The men of the village have never
trusted the women—and I always blamed the people of the wood. Those who run
their rituals, who perform them and see everything out, are the females. From
what I could tell, they held the most power in the clan. I was one of the few
people brave enough to watch them and not look away—even when one might be
looking straight at me.
But this business with the killing
was unlike anything I’d ever seen before. For one thing, I had never seen the
people of the wood kill one of their own. And I had never heard them speak so
clearly—not that I could understand them.
***
Elim sighed
as he watched the elders walking back from the crossroads. He didn’t know what
they were thinking—everyone knew that the untouchables were watching, and
they’d killed Marike anyway. He wondered if this meant the crossroads were
opened. Sarit had been the one who carried down the line of those who’d created
the treaty for the crossroads, and now she was dead. Without anyone to carry on
her line, there was no way to tell what would happen. Marike had destroyed their very way of life by taking the
witch. Without Sarit, the Coetir Dewin had no one to guide them.
Elim sat atop
a tree on the edge of the crossroads, looking down on one of the untouchables.
She’d been watching while the elders had taken Marike and stolen his essence.
He almost thought she would cry out when Marike’s essence was taken, but
instead she simply cowered farther into her thicket of branches.
It made him
curious, in a way, to see the way she watched them. He’d never before been so
close to the crossroads, or seen an untouchable this closely. She had light
brown hair, and it looked soft, almost like the fur of an animal. Her eyes
weren’t black, like his. They were light, white like fresh clouds and green
like spring leaves. And her skin! It was unlike anything Elim had ever seen
before. It was pale and smooth, but the color was different. She didn’t appear
to have the tiny scales that covered his body, and she never changed colors—he
would’ve thought that the fear would have caused it to change, like it did for
the Coetir.
If the laws
had permitted it, he would’ve wanted to see her even closer—but there was no
way. Even without Sarit, who’d carried on the lines and laws, it still wasn’t
safe. The untouchables did not follow the Vartes—it was not safe to associate
with them. Without the Vartes, their whole way of life would be gone. Even
without Sarit, they would hold to the creator’s guidance.
The Vartes
would reveal the next witch. The creator always did—though generally there was
linearity involved. But Sarit had no heir—she had never chosen a man to form an
heir with.
It was the
first time this had ever happened in the history of the Dewin. Even among the Anialych, the Mynidd, and the Dŵr, it was
unheard of. The Coetir were the first. The Coetir elders would be awakened, and would have to
fast and consult the Vartes before their witch would be revealed. She would be
chosen from those who had trained with the elders or with the witch, he
guessed. But it would be a woman, chosen to train them in the
ways of the Vartes, and she would define their future.
He wondered
if this was what Marike had intended.
There was
no reason in his mind to explain why this had happened. Sarit had been a good
witch for the Coetir. She had taught them well. Marike had said as much on many
occasions.
Elim’s eyes
widened as he watched the untouchable woman stand from behind her hiding place.
She was
slender, like the Coetir, but she was shorter than many of the adult Coetir. He
wondered how she would compare to rest of the Dewin: the other druidic beings
of the planet.
Unthinkingly,
he jumped down form the treetops, landing well inside the Coetir’s side of the
crossroads. When he landed, his eyes looked straight into hers.
Her jaw
dropped, her blunt teeth now clearly in view, and she took a single step back.
She made no sound, save her feet crunching on the leaves. He’d never heard that
sound come from anything but an animal before.
“Helo.” He
didn’t know why he said it.
As soon as
she replied, he turned away. He didn’t listen as she spoke—but he stopped in
his tracks when he felt her presence beyond the crossroads.
At that
moment, he knew that nothing would be the same.
He turned
his head toward her, and he watched as she crunched across the golden leaves,
slowly making her way toward him.
“Aros, os
gwelwch yn dda,” he said. “Wait, please.”
Her eyes
said that she didn’t understand, but she did not speak. She only stared
straight into his eyes, and slowly moved closer to him.
Crunching
echoed all around them, and he watched as her feet created the sound. Never in
his life had he seen someone so similar to him and yet so very different,
someone capable of making a sound when they stepped on the leaves.
“Aros,” he
said again. “Wait.”
He should
never have shown himself to her. He’d seen her curiosity, and he’d exploited
it—all so that he could see her a little closer. Sarit would never have allowed
this to happen. The witch had never even allowed them so close to the
crossroads. It was only special circumstances that had allowed the elders to
execute Marike there.
This
untouchable woman should never have been so close. She should never have been
allowed to cross into their land, and she shouldn’t have been so close to him
now. It wasn’t safe.
***
I didn’t
know what I was thinking. Seeing the man, so close to me, was like electricity.
His purple skin lightened when his eyes met mine. His gaze shifted to my feet as I
began to step closer.
I couldn’t
stop.
I’d already
crossed the safe zone, I was almost beyond the boundary. Coming so far, my feet
refused to stop. They, along with the rest of my body, only wanted to see him a
little closer.
Reason had
been abandoned—but perhaps that had happened years ago, when I began my
fascination with the people of the wood.
The man
spoke to me, but I didn’t understand his words. I was so enamored with the
sight before me that I wasn’t even sure he’d spoken until I saw his lips move.
The only
sound around us was the crunching of leaves beneath my feet. The rest had gone
silent. As I moved closer to him, the birds were silent, there was no wind,
there was only the crunching of the leaves.
My arm
reached toward him, and he flinched away—but it didn’t stop me. He looked as
though he couldn’t even move. The look in his eyes betrayed his fear. I didn’t
speak, because I had no words, but as I placed my fingers against the cold skin
of his arm, we each drew in a sharp breath.
The sounds
of the wood immediately returned. Birds sang their songs, wind blew the leaves
against each other. The man’s eyes looked right back into mine.
“Go back,”
he said. “Ewch yn ôl.”
My brow
furrowed. It was not lost on me that I hadn’t understood any of his people
before.
“You cannot
be here.” “Ni allwch fod yma.” His
eyes pled with mine, begging me to listen to him.
“Yes.” It
was all that I could think to say.
I removed
my fingers from his skin, and I ran. I don’t know what I was thinking. I only
ran, and I didn’t look back.
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